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moretoknow
2004-04-16 :: 6:21 p.m.

Liberation

First Impression={4/5} Yay, fishy!...So yeah, what the heck?! Colorado Avalanche?!?! Gay. But I guess seeing as how you're from Colorado, you have a reason. I used to like Edmonton Oilers until they started sucking. Well when I read your "100 things" I didn’t expect to hear your whole sex life! (Exaggeration, I know) But jebus! You sound interesting though so I'll give you a chance.

Layout={24/25} Eye heart the fishy. I like the font of "Unexpected Liberation." I like the swirly things that separate the navigation. And I like how the layout fills up the whole page, giving you more space for your entry and not being so tight and compacted. (I'm a bit claustrophobic) So points...Points all around!

Content={30/35} I looked at your pictures. Normally I'd be like "Eww, what the hell, whats with the nekkidness?!" But I actually liked it. It was very...artistic. I love photography like that. Especially black and white photos. Good good.

I love when people break their entries into paragraphs. It doesnt seem so long and drawn out. I also love the way you started your entire diary. You came in, told why you were there, what you were going to be talking about, what you were going to be doing in the near future, and who you would talk about (without getting into too much detail). You didnt talk about your life history and thats awesome. Adds mystery!

I like the way you write. You sound like you're actually talking. Most people on the internet dont sound anything like they do in real life, and I HATE that. But you sound very normal and casual like you talk that way in everyday life. I dig it. You use a type of writing style that, even if you are doing daylogs, its really interesting.

Contact={5/5} Guestbook, notes, email address, and Aim. Haha, I love your email address...

Errors={5/5} Nothing that I saw.

Updates={8/10} Some months you'll have tons of entries. Then other months you wont...Its all good though.

Extras={10/10} Bio/100, cast, moments, rings, links quizzes, yearbook, subscribers, poetry, stories, pictures, and CD reviews..

Wave={4/5} Yeah dood, I might come back.

Total={90/100}

Reviewed by: Kelly

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